October contest attempt (critiques welcome)!
Hi all, it's been awhile since I've posted anything- but I've been listening to the podcast and got excited to try to work again. Trying something different! I still want to add texture- maybe push the light/dark, and also maybe add more small details...thoughts? Thanks!
Braden Hallett last edited by
Yaaaaaas! More frankenpuppers!
My first thought is that I want Penny to look relieved/happy that her experiment has worked. I see a very neutral expression (love the look on the mom )
Thanks! I can totally see that- I was trying for kind of a happy grimace on Penny, but since she's supposed to be "relieved" she should look more clearly happy (and I don't think my intent was reading right anyway).
chrisaakins last edited by
@CaroStoltz this is such a funny piece. I actually think you could add a third girl and make her happy and keep grimace girl. I love the expressions.
@chrisaakins Thank you!!