Trying to develop my illustration style

[jwing]

Working on developing a more simplistic/narrative-centered style, so here's a small piece i made a couple days ago Any critique is appreciated!

[TessaW]

I love it. Great gestures, appealing characters, and a pleasing composition. My one critique is that it's suffering from a slight blurry quality that often plagues digital line work. I think it needs to be ever so slightly sharpened up.

[lou]

@jwing I like the facial expression...says to me that this isn't the first nor the last time the 'time out box' will be used! I think I need one of those in my house! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

[jwing]

@tessaw Thank you! I'll try to sharpen the lineart up a bit, it does look a little blurry heh

[jwing]

@lou Thank you!

[juliepeelart]

@jwing very cute! The gesture is spot on. On little thing, there is kind of a funny tangent where the foot meets the box. Maybe move the character back a little?