The odds that he will get away are rather small - hidden WIP

[kylebeaudette]

@jonas-zavacky I just watched Akira this weekend
This looks great so far!

TETSUUOOOOOO

[MichaelMattocks]

@jonas-zavacky I think you lose the focus now. in the top one you have a character at the end of the alley which draws your attention. your hidden guy is cropped and looks like you are hiding him in the composition. Dropping the view done changes the feel.

[Jonas Zavacky]

@michaelmattocks hmm, I see what you mean. We'll see how I will manage that. Maybe I can make the character that is hiding be almost lost in shadow and left the stuff that is important only so the feel may be close. The character in the alley will be there too.

[Jonas Zavacky]

alright... this is it for the background i think.. any advice before I add the characters?

[Jonas Zavacky]

alright I changed the lighting as it doesn't looked like a night scene

[leothejediartist]

I'm digging this but I'm also torn. I did like how the composition of the original post looked, but I think the most updated scene has alot more feeling to it, more atmosphere. Can't wait to see the finished piece

[Jonas Zavacky]

@leothejediartist I totally see what you mean! But well... I decided to go for the second composition. (it is not I don't like the current result)

Thank you

[leothejediartist]

I totally support the decision lol didn't mean to sound negative. Unrelated related point, is Akira on Netflix or anything? I've never seen it

[AbbyLucero]

This is so spot on! Love the composition and atmosphere with the new lighting. Can’t wait to see how it looks composited all together!

[Jonas Zavacky]

@leothejediartist hehe okay well I don't know if it is on Netflix, but if you just search "akira online" there should be results

[Jonas Zavacky]

@abbylucero Thank you so much Abby!!

[Donfito]

@jonas-zavacky

definitely the last color composition, it looks more mysterious, purple is a good color too make this kind of feelings too.
waiting to see the final result.

[Jonas Zavacky]

@donfito hey! thanks I agree. I already posted the final result into the challenge thread