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Today I want to show you three pieces which I did in a kind of postcard format. One of it is still in progress. They mimic somehow a papercraft style. In all pieces there are three sparrows, the guy with the cap is Francois. He was the first one, who was born in my mind. But then also the other two showed up. I want them to talk mostly with their eyes and body language. Any feedback or ideas?
These are REALLY cute. I really like what you have going on here.
Is the grid in the top images supposed to be a net or a wire fence? If the latter, I have a hard time believing they could bend it that much. If the former, why are they climbing on it? I guess I just don't quite understand what is going on or what the location is in that first one.
I feel like there should be some sort of support to the bar they are sitting on in the second.
I love the third! Maybe as an artist I just think its the most fun. I would move both the artist and the other two a little bit closer to the center though--I know you should stand far from your subject when drawing, but the middle just feels a bit empty to me.
Those are just my gut reactions. Overall, great work, I really like your designs here.