Book Dummy - Need Some Feedback

[Wendy Plybon]

I started working on a book dummy for my portfolio. I marked out pagination and sketched some layout thumbs. I'd like some feedback on how I marked out the story and the types of illustrations I've chosen for each part of the story before I proceed with the initial layout sketches for each page. Basically, does it read well? Thanks!!

Here is the story:
[0_1499217505444_TheFrogPrince_BookDummy.pdf](Uploading 100%)

And the thumbs:
[0_1499217465449_ FrogPrince_Dummy_Thumbs.jpg](Uploading 100%)

[Wendy Plybon]

Hmm... for some reason it keeps telling me that I "don't have enough privileges for this action" when I try to upload the files... any suggestions?

[Chip Valecek]

Try resizing your images smaller.

[Wendy Plybon]

Ok, maybe this will work.

Story:

And Thumbs:

Thanks, @Chip-Valecek for the suggestion!