Illustration feeback.

[IanS]

I'm currently building my portfolio with work I like doing oppose to work which I think will get me commissions. My first piece in this series is a tribute to my favourite characters in Monty Python's Holy Grail. The knights who say ni! I just need a fresh pair of eyes to give this a look over. I should have posted this earlier as I've already done the thumbnails, worked up a final drawing and started painting in the values. Better late than never!

Thanks

Ian

[dvandegriend]

I quite like it! The composition is pretty good and I knew exactly who the characters were right away. The only thing I would say is it's a lot of dark. Maybe try to find a coupe other areas to make a little brighter? Nice work friend!

[IanS]

Thanks @dvandegriend for the feedback!

[MOO]

I didn't see an image. ??