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    • Rebecca Hirsch
      Rebecca Hirsch last edited by

      Working on a story, this page has a boy flying with geese. Tried to block out composition with value and silhouette first which I think went well, but wondering if I should take a step back and rework the shapes of the geese. Thoughts and comments welcome.
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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

        I think just the second goose looks to be in an odd shape. The others read well.


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        • Rebecca Hirsch
          Rebecca Hirsch @Chip Valecek last edited by

          @Chip-Valecek Agreed. I think I'll do a few more goose studies and give a few of them another go.

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