Share July HTFYA Ideas & WIP - (Food Truck)

[LauraA]

@jahn I feel like the (well-executed) sun flare is distracting me from the main point, which is clever. I'd make the animals a more prominent part of the scene. Work on making their silhouettes interesting, and put some lighting on at least some of them, so we can have some character interest.

[jahn]

@LauraA I agree, once again I got too focused on detailing the sky before composing the rest of the piece, but yesterday I brought more of the animals forward and I am planning on finishing the details and adding shading afterward. Also, the sun flare was conveniently a custom brush I purchased haha.

[LauraA]

@jahn Here's an example of what you can do with some cropping. I didn't spend long in it, but it's an idea. Also, a lot of AD's don't want to see the back of a character. I didn't intend to create such a focal point on the smaller bear so you might need to move it around, but you could play it up and consider having the baby bear turn around to look excitedly at its mother. As for lighting, you do need dark values, but can put on some rim lighting. Just some quick thoughts.

[jahn]

@LauraA
I think your suggestion does contain the focal point a little better than my wider angle. I will have to play around with my cropping a little more.
I was originally thinking of doing a night or evening scene, and the animals would be more of a shadowy silhouette but one of my friends pointed out "Why would they be going to the dump at night?"
I am planning on bringing shadows to the truck and trees and some rim lighting to the animals to help make it all look a bit better and more cohesive.

[Sarah VanDam]

@LauraA Nice! I like your character poses.

[LauraA]

@jahn Aren't both bears and raccoons more or less nocturnal? I mean, I've seen a bear during the day, but I suspect they're out at night, too. At any rate, I think you can make a case for the hour you want, except maybe for raccoons at midday. The point is, they're in the shadows.

[LauraA]

@Sarah-VanDam Thanks! This thing just wasn't striking me the right way yesterday no matter what I did with it. I may do some more thumbs just to make sure. I really liked your solution and now I can't unsee it!

[jahn]

This is where my progress is at currently, after rearraging all the elements and adding details. What I have left to do is finish detailing the trees and foreground elements then add shading. Any thoughts on compositions and placement of the elements?

[A Former User]

@jahn It seems reasonable to assume that Rhonda is professional and responsible. To me, it would make sense if one of the forest critters, like a raccoon, was in the back of the trash truck opening the sealed bags and distributing the spoils to his buddies.

[Larue]

Hi there people!
Okay I’ve missed two prompts and I’m trying to get one in for this prompt. I’m playing around with 3 concepts and I think I know which one I favor but I wanted to hear your opinion. These are concept only, not layout, story design etc. appreciate any feed back. I’ll be narrowing it down tomorrow or the next day if you want to put in your “vote
I want your opinion on which of these three concepts I should move forward with. Don’t judge layouts etc, just concepts, thanks
1- floating meat boat serving fishing boats
2- turtle pulling a yeti cooler to serve frozen treats to the desert in animals
3- The witch from Hansel and Gretel giving away free samples with a path leading back to the woods for “ more”

[Larue]

@jahn
Hi Jahn, first off, I think concept is great and I know you’ve put a lot of time and energy into this. I’m going to add what I think Jake, Lee and Will would say. The story telling isn’t clear enough. I know what’s happening but if I didn’t know the prompt I’d just say “ a truck is dropping stuff/garbage off it in the woods” Are the animals disgusted that her truck is dropping stuff in their forest? I can’t see facial expression or body language. If they love this food truck shouldn’t they be excited, maybe carrying baskets to collect stuff up in, or even wearing things they picked up from her last drive through? I think a couple coming out from across the way would be good too so we could see their excited faces. Maybe loading up a wheel barrow with stuff. I hope I’m not saying too much. I’ve just watched enough of there podcasts so I’m giving you a friendly heads up.

[LauraA]

Unfortunately I will not be able to finish my illo (see above) in time for HTFYA because I now have a broken right elbow. It's going to be a loooong summer!

[LauraA]

@Larue The Hansel & Gretel one has a dark sense of humor that makes me laugh. At 1st glance it's my favorite. The only thing is, it's almost like the house itself is already like a food truck? In that both are a lure...

The turtle is cute but I feel like the guys will say it's not different enough.

The meat boat has potential. It reminds me of my husband whenever he comes back from Finland. "Anything but salmon!" Of course it all depnds depends on the execution. You'd really want to play up the differences, show them pocketing loads of cash, etc.

Good luck!

[jahn]

@thomas-young That is a good idea, I'll add that

[jahn]

@Larue oh yes, thanks for pointing this out. Do you think if I added a sign that said "Landfill" to imply she is headed that way would help make it more cohesive?
Initially I wanted the animals to look "realistic" but that might not bring as much story-telling. Whereas if I gave them more eager or hungry poses and expressions or had them carrying items they found that might help make it more clear.

[jahn]

@Larue I would say Hansel & Grettal idea is the most funny and with a twist of dark humor.

[jahn]

@LauraA bummer! Hope you heal quickly!

[Sarah VanDam]

@LauraA OH NO!!! Get better soon! Dang it!

I still want to see you finish this sometime. I’ll say for myself, I’ve gotten inspiration from Critique Arena and HTFYA and started a few pieces that I didn’t finish in time. BUT, I think I’m going to make time this summer to finish some of them, and I’ll share them with the group when I do.

[Gabby Correia]

Here's my first rough sketch. Not too sure if it's tickling my fancy yet...

[MarcRobinson]

Late to the party... Again. Trying to make this one using my preferred process of using a traditional pencil drawing first. My idea is a food truck selling "Food for Thought". Got to feed the mind too!