Mouse journey feedback
Kim Rosenlof last edited by Kim Rosenlof
@Asyas_illos This is really cute. I love the colors and the composition.
If you squint your eyes, the mouse gets lost in the background a little, and I see the mushrooms first because of their value. I made it black and white below to show how close the values are between the mouse and background. You could make the mouse darker since the light is coming from the right, so the left will be partially shaded anyway, or you could put a light cool blue-green color behind the mouse to make the reddish orange stand out.
It is a nice piece and I love all the nature elements you are using. Can't wait to see the finished piece.
kirsten-mcg last edited by
@Asyas_illos I love this as a start of your series! The little mouse looking at his atlas and dreaming of all the places he'd like to go. And then he makes his dreams a reality!
Asyas_illos last edited by
@Kim-Rosenlof thanks for the value check! That’s really helpful, I’ve put this one on the back burner for now but I’ll revisit it soon!