LUCKY: WIP for Luck running out…
chrisaakins last edited by
I know it’s a wee bit early but I had the idea this morning. I was thinking of a dynamic scene in which an extremely lucky rabbit, Chancy (see what I did there?) and his pal, a duck, run out of luck in the middle of a car race. They pop a tire and are flung headlong into some prickly pears.
Here’s my idea so far:
Does it read well?
Does it look fun and engaging?
How’s the composition?
I plan on adding all the good luck charms he had flinging out of the car. I labeled them in the picture but won’t in the final.
Also, words or no words?
Jeremy Ross last edited by
Great idea @chrisaakins! Suggest no words with golden nuggets throughout in terms of luck.
Can’t wait to see it finished!
AngelinaKizz last edited by
@chrisaakins what if Rabbit comes slightly more forward, the cliff and the rocks are pushed further back so that you don’t lose the view of the car, but rabbit is going to make the landing. One paw, is close enough to the viewer to see he’ll land ok? I feel that would encapsulate the bad luck and the luck together at the same time.