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    • demotlj
      demotlj SVS OG last edited by

      I agree that B is better. The fish hook is as @Melissa-Bailey-0 said, "ominous."

      Laurie DeMott
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      • carlianne
        carlianne @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

        @Nyrryl-Cadiz I like the fishy too!

        For the font though I still find your name a little hard to read.

        Since you're name isn't part of the title I think you can make it smaller / not the same width as the text above. It'll help it feel like it's own entity and The "nyr" part of your name is hard to read over the busy dark green leaves anyway.

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        • Jacy13
          Jacy13 @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @Nyrryl-Cadiz I also agree that B looks better to me! 🙂

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          • Tristan Lapetz
            Tristan Lapetz @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

            @Nyrryl-Cadiz I'm with B as well, A is a little too ominous for the joyful vibe of the rest of the scene.

            Happy creating,
            Tristan

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

              @Kim-Rosenlof @Melissa-Bailey-0 @demotlj @carlianne @Jacy13 @Tristan-Lapetz Thank you so much for the feedback, everyone! I totally see what you mean, tho I must admit, 'ominous' is actually what I was going for. lolz

              However, I gave it some thought and I've decided not to use either. I just feel that both are not up to snuff. I know I can come up with something better but I think I've just had it with this piece for now. I don't wanna work on it anymore. I just want it to be done. 😅

              I hope y'all don't hate me for wasting your time. 😅✌

              @carlianne Thank you so much for the note on my name. That's definitely something I'd never even think of. Here it is below. This is probably my last edit on this piece unless I deceide otherwise. lolzzz

              Again Thank you so much, everyone!!!!

              sarah dtyis mermaid 6.jpg

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