Nyrryl Inktober 2021 - ROBYN FOR HOMECOMING QUEEN - all feedback welcomed

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Hi, everyone! I'm starting a short middle grade series for my portfolio. I plan to make about 7/6 illustrations. 2 will be in full color while the rest will be in black and white, all of which I will complete this Inktober.

I'll be posting my progress here. All feedback is welcomed. Thanks!

[baileyvidler]

So cute! I love your characters' expressions! Very excited to see this project come along!

[Jeremy Ross]

These look great @Nyrryl-Cadiz!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@baileyvidler @Jeremy-Ross Thank u!!!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

ROBYN FOR HOMECOMING QUEEN - 1 OF 5

look who finally finished an Inktober piece! how will this story continue? stay tuned

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

new sketch

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

new sketch:

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

new sketch

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

New Update!

[randarrington]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz said in Nyrryl Inktober 2021 - ROBYN FOR HOMECOMING QUEEN - all feedback welcomed:

new sketch

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Update

[CukiArtist]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz

I think this is a great series of artworks, I love the storytelling and character designs. You have great gestures, expressions, and interaction.

My feedback on the most recent one is that to me at first glance the girl getting fitted for a dress looks much older than the rest, especially the 'good' guys. Partly this is the figure but also size, she looks nearly twice as tall as them, even the girl next to her doesn't even reach her shoulders.
My suggestion would be to make the good guys a bit bigger and maybe tweak her proportions a bit to more match the girl standing next to her? Or have the girl next to her kneeling and doing something with the hem to show that she's standing on a really tall dressing stand, she can still be peering around to mock the good guys and to me it would also cement her as a 'minion'.

I hope this helps.

[aprilshin]

I love this series! And the character design is so appealing. I can't wait to see more updates to this! Thanks for sharing, Nyrryl!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@aprilshin Thank you!

@CukiArtist Thanks for the input! I just moved the mean girl a bit lower.