3rd Thurs. Window or no window?
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Any feedback is appreciated, thank you! I'm sort of unhappy with the whole cheerleader area...it was hard to figure out where to put their hands/arms. I feel ok about my guy and the hallway leading to the doors/exit. Just not sure about the window. I feel like the wall is too plain. I'm a middle school teacher so I'm used to lots of "love" drama at school
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@Carrie I like the window better. But perhaps a bulletin board or something along those lines might also work?
And I remember those days...haha
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I think the window adds more visual interest. Also then, reflections, light?
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Great idea! If the girls are meant to be a main focal point of the piece, I would not have the window, or at least simplify it so they stand out more. You also could lighten or blur the background a bit to bring the focus back to the main characters. just my 2 cents.
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@shinjifujioka Ha ha! They are difficult days...I just broke up a fight this morning. Fortunately, it wasn't about love Thanks for the input!
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@Beatriz-"Bett" Thanks for the feedback!
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@Spencer-Hale Good advice, Spencer. Thank you so much. I really like the blurring the background idea. I'll try it!
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Like this image and story, with or without the window does not bother me. Wonder what high school is like in this country haha hopefully not like the movies.
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I think their silhouettes read more clearly without the window. I agree that a bulletin board might work better than the window if you want to have something on that wall.
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@Naroth-Kean Thank you! I imagine schools all over have similar problems...love being one of them
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@Sarah-LuAnn Thank you for your idea. I appreciate your thoughts. I'm going to try a bulletin board, too.
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I vote no window, its a bit clearer.
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@NickA Thanks!
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I agree with no window guys