need some fresh eyes :)

[Tom Burchell]

so like tittle says i need some fresh eyes to have a look at this so would love to hear any feedback etc :)!

[Matthew Oberdier]

I think it's a really fun piece. For future compositions, I would consider more size variations and more overlap.

[NessIllustration]

@Tom-Burchell It's such a fun piece and concept! I just feel like the comp is too crowded. Every inch of the image is covered with something, at equal intervals too. It's important to leave some breathing space for the eye here and there! With every inch covered, you're having a hard time directing the eye through the image. I don't know what to look at first and there's no clear focal point.

[Tom Burchell]

@NessIllustration XD i was making it thinking maybe ill get away with it go crazy and in my mind it was always sasying its to crowed tom!!! so you just confimed my dreaded suspicion XD time to make it more tight knitted and cozier haha!!
thanks for feedback