Childrens book dummy! Opinions on this??

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Hello fellas!
I am currently working on some children book pages dummies!
Also , I use another style of mine for this one!
What do you think about it?
What do you think works?
And which version of those two is better?
Share your opinions if you want!!
Cheers!!

Giorgos

[KaraDaniel]

@Georgios-Christopoulos I think the creature and the mirror are great! I prefer the top one. Very nice ️

[Jeannelle]

Same for me. I like the top one better too.

[donnamakesart]

what emotion do you want the page to convey?

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@KaraDaniel thanks for the words!!yes i am leaning towards the top one too!!
@Jeannelle-Pita yes!!thanks a lot!
@donnamakesart I don't actually have this figured out. It begun more of a style exploration..But since you asked, I would say mystery-adventure-confusing for the character scene.thanks for your comment!!