Feedback Welcomed - Sequential Work for my Website!
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Hello, I got rid of all my character design sheets on my website and other pieces that I think are not strong enough to appeal to an agency that I might either scrap or revise later along the way. Down below are the pieces I feel like I am going to work on or revise for my portfolio. A lot of you have been really helpful in my art journey, so your feedback is always welcomed. Right now I only have 11 pieces in my portfolio now and 4 them also need to be revised.
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This piece is called "The Monkey and the Tortoise". I drew this piece when I was still in high school, probably around 2013. As you can see I wasn't really the master of color theory that I am today. I was also afraid of doing artwork without lineart back then with my characters. I did several sequential pieces for these, but I only fully colored three, because that's probably all I need from this story to add to my portfolio.
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I am not planning on coloring all of these but I think it's worth sharing.
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@Michael-Angelo-Go hi! Ah!!! You beat me to it!!!
i was also planning to illustrate the Monkey and the Tortoise
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Maybe you can do the messed up version where the turtle gets revenge at the monkey by impaling them with thorns and feeding the pieces to his monkey clan
Btw how's my composition/storytelling skills?
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@Michael-Angelo-Go i think the composition is great! your characters are adorable and I love your colors. My one minor suggestion would be to change the color of the sky. it's currebtly greenish and it kinda gives off an eerie atmosphere. maybe a soft blue would look great. But then a again this is just a minor nit pick. i think you've done an amazing job here. Very professional looking work!
