Feedback Welcomed - Sequential Work for my Website!



  • Hello, I got rid of all my character design sheets on my website and other pieces that I think are not strong enough to appeal to an agency that I might either scrap or revise later along the way. Down below are the pieces I feel like I am going to work on or revise for my portfolio. A lot of you have been really helpful in my art journey, so your feedback is always welcomed. Right now I only have 11 pieces in my portfolio now and 4 them also need to be revised.

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    This piece is called "The Monkey and the Tortoise". I drew this piece when I was still in high school, probably around 2013. As you can see I wasn't really the master of color theory that I am today. I was also afraid of doing artwork without lineart back then with my characters. I did several sequential pieces for these, but I only fully colored three, because that's probably all I need from this story to add to my portfolio.

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    I am not planning on coloring all of these but I think it's worth sharing.


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    @Michael-Angelo-Go hi! Ah!!! You beat me to it!!! 😂😂😂 i was also planning to illustrate the Monkey and the Tortoise



  • Maybe you can do the messed up version where the turtle gets revenge at the monkey by impaling them with thorns and feeding the pieces to his monkey clan 😂😂😂

    Btw how's my composition/storytelling skills?


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    @Michael-Angelo-Go i think the composition is great! your characters are adorable and I love your colors. My one minor suggestion would be to change the color of the sky. it's currebtly greenish and it kinda gives off an eerie atmosphere. maybe a soft blue would look great. But then a again this is just a minor nit pick. i think you've done an amazing job here. Very professional looking work!


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