Just wanted to share this one here! feedback is welcome
Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by
@SaherYosry hi great lighting but what's the story?
Jacy13 last edited by
@SaherYosry I love the color scheme and lighting choices going on in your piece. As Nyrryl Cadiz has already asked, is there a story to go along with the image? Or is it a standalone piece without a story?
ajillustrates last edited by
@SaherYosry I love this, especially the colors and the character! There's just a few tweaks I'd suggest:
- You could amp up the light of the lantern that hits the floor, the character, and the closest objects (barrel, ball, and chest).
- Watch out for tangents. The light from the door flows right into the bottom edge of the table top in the foreground, and the character's sleeve is getting lost in the side of it's body. A few shifts in paint will fix those spots.
- Unless you're planning on placing some text in here, it would be cool to see some objects in the center of the piece, with the doors light cutting over them.
I want to see what your character is looking for, and I think that's the mark of really successful piece!
@Nyrryl-Cadiz @Jacy13 Thank you! Honestly I have no idea what the story is, it's just a scene that came to my mind.
@ajillustrates Thank you so much, appreciate your feedback!