I finished the writing, and here are the rough to semi finished illustrations. How can i improve the way the pictures and words work together? Is the story bubble in the last illustration distracting or confusing? If so, any ideas how i can clarify it? Would it work if i took the bubble out

@Meta said in Slow, slow Slowvember ... children's right to roam: I could imagine that the workflow on a screen tablet is much smoother screen tablet vs a regular ol slab of plastic tablet is like night and day. It would definitely help your lineart look more natural out of photoshop. Really neat project, by the way Lovin' how it's goin

@Ionut-Marian I'm pretty sure this is her instagram account here: https://www.instagram.com/irinageorgescudraws/?hl=en He work is so beautiful, thanks for the follow up comment so that I could find it.

Like them a lot, great movement and joy that comes from this picture! I like the 3rd one the most because the children jump out more. Really love it!