19 Jan 2020, 20:28
Ok, so here is my progress so far. I am tying to test my shading before I add color. What are some thoughts on it? please and Thank you. 
January WIP
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Ok, so here is my progress so far. I am tying to test my shading before I add color. What are some thoughts on it? please and Thank you.
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I like where it’s going so far! Question about the tracks: they look close enough to something normal that I’m not sure if I’m supposed to know what they are or not? Maybe you could push their weirdness factor?
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@Braxton that is a good point. Thank you.
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my progress.
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Looking good! Maybe the tracks could be pushed even farther, like adding 5 toes? Idk maybe then they wouldn’t even read as tracks? One other thing, you might try darkening the background a bit to push the contrast between the foreground and background. The little boy’s silhouette popped more in the black and white drawing, but it’s a little less evident in the latest version.
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@Mandy-Forte the colors are very cheerful
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@Mandy-Forte cute! For some reason my eyes keep getting drawn to the brown bunny with the pointy ears...they sort of point me to the upper left and it is also the only animal where we don't see the face and the thought distracted me from what was going on to the right. Looking forward to seeing your progress!