Hi guys!
I'm still very much new here and this is my first time asking for critique. I'm currently following the Composition class by Will Terry. Just before I joined SVS I started a new idea for a painting in my sketchbook and I made a thumbnail beforehand (I already learned to make some more moving forward, haha).
I then went on to create the larger sketch, which in the end I will transfer/digitize to create a finished piece.
The composition is not sitting very well with me. When I look at the examples in Will's course I can understand the critiques on some of the example compositions. When it's pointed out to me, I can see the flaws. I have a hard time detecting composition flaws in my own work, I just have a feeling that something is off. So maybe you like to have a look with me? I'm planning to create new thumbnails and start over.
The concept for the drawing: The little animals are lending a hand changing the seasons from Autumn to Winter. It's a "practice" piece for which I intend to sell the final result as an art print in my Etsy shop. The thumbnail is pictured on the left. Sorry for the low quality image, it was dark and taken with my iPhone :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: Note: more animals will be added, hanging little lights on the tree.
Thank you!
Nadya