14 Nov 2018, 20:08

I recently listened to the 3 Point Perspective on critics and decided to come so I could gain some valuable critics for a piece I recently created.

I do like it as I feel it is one of the few pieces I have created that tell a story. With that said I am looking for two areas to improve:

  1. What can I do to improve the storytelling, something I can apply to future images as well.
  2. What is one thing I can do to improve the quality of the art? (Right now I feel I need to go through the inking class on SVS learn again and so I can improve line weight priority.)

I want to keep growing my work, not looking for flattery but good feedback that will help me level up as I am doing this on my own, and through watching the training on SVS Learn.

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