I recently listened to the 3 Point Perspective on critics and decided to come so I could gain some valuable critics for a piece I recently created.

I do like it as I feel it is one of the few pieces I have created that tell a story. With that said I am looking for two areas to improve:

1. What can I do to improve the storytelling, something I can apply to future images as well.
2. What is one thing I can do to improve the quality of the art? (Right now I feel I need to go through the inking class on SVS learn again and so I can improve line weight priority.)

I want to keep growing my work, not looking for flattery but good feedback that will help me level up as I am doing this on my own, and through watching the training on SVS Learn.

I like this challenge. Too bad I noticed in Mid November, but I will start with day one today and then finish it out for the 30 days. Thank you for the resources as well; this is something I had been looking for to help fill in the gaps.

Is there a link to where I can make a similar brush as to what @Will-Terry used for his painting? I am wanting to try this technique with one of my drawings and would like to try the airbrush for coloring. I will be creating attempting in Procreate first as this is always with me.

I like this challenge. Too bad I noticed in Mid November, but I will start with day one today and then finish it out for the 30 days. Thank you for the resources as well; this is something I had been looking for to help fill in the gaps.

Thank you

Thank you for your critic. I know I applied some, not a lot of shadows when I started the coloring but it does look like I forgot about them when I did the rest of the coloring.

I agree the background may not be needed to tell the story and it is dark. I plan to update the color for the back, and I will stay away from the heavy grays and use some color instead. I think the background helps complete the picture, so I do not want to remove it, but it does need some transformation help.

I may have to work on the teeth, have to think about that one and see about keeping or getting rid of them.

I recently listened to the 3 Point Perspective on critics and decided to come so I could gain some valuable critics for a piece I recently created.

I do like it as I feel it is one of the few pieces I have created that tell a story. With that said I am looking for two areas to improve:

1. What can I do to improve the storytelling, something I can apply to future images as well.
2. What is one thing I can do to improve the quality of the art? (Right now I feel I need to go through the inking class on SVS learn again and so I can improve line weight priority.)

I want to keep growing my work, not looking for flattery but good feedback that will help me level up as I am doing this on my own, and through watching the training on SVS Learn.