15 Sept 2018, 15:11

Hi Kyle 🙂

Great work! A very fun illustration!

I feel like maybe the composition is a bit unbalanced. The top right is very empty and it feels a bit like this hill is alone in the world, you know what I mean?

I think 3 things I would do would be:
1- Add a big tree on the foreground to frame the composition and make it look a bit like we're peering at the hill from behind a tree
2- Add some clouds in the sky to populate that top right corner, but not draw the eye to it too much
3- Add a whit-ish mist around the horizon line to add a bit more winter atmosphere to the picture.

Quickly, it could look a bit like that:

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What do you guys think?