20 Aug 2018, 01:41
@art-of-b Oh yes, thanks for spotting the tangent. I can make it curl round into the scene. Brilliant. I appreciate it!
Critique Picture Book Front Cover
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Hi everyone. This is a front cover for a picture book I have written and still a work in progress. Can you see anything that stands out that needs to be fixed? Thanks!
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I can't see much that should be fixed with easy filters and such. It looks pretty nice.
If it's possible to move and/or adjust the fern in the lower left so that it's not creating quite as much of a tangent with the border it may be a good idea.
Other than that, thumbs up!
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@art-of-b Oh yes, thanks for spotting the tangent. I can make it curl round into the scene. Brilliant. I appreciate it!
- 22 days later
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Thanks @Art-of-B I fixed the tangent. I'm pretty happy with everything overall all and ready to move on to the inside pages.
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Hi! My main concern is your title font. I’m afraid that font style won’t be legible from afar when in a bookstore or if the image is shrunk down to a thumbnail on a website. Perhaps choose something bigger, bolder, but simple. Great job on the illustration. I hope this helps.
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This is great! Looks good to me, I wouldn't change anything. Fun style!
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@nyrrylcadiz Thanks, that's a good point . I'll have a go at making the font text a bit bigger and stronger. I appreciate it!
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@kylebeaudette Thanks Kyle!
