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    tried out how to Ink with a genie

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    • Leontine
      Leontine last edited by

      ow, nice! Love the lines and fibe! The only thing is the top character is not reading really good. I cant figure out what the pose is. may there's something to fix ?

      Leontine
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        Nille Horgen last edited by

        Thank you guys! I needed a little boost right now. I can maybe make the shadow so you see the character better. I think i didnt draw the full body at once. And therefore i lost the movement. Looking forward to making more aswell! 😃

        Love Nille

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        • Katrina Fowler
          Katrina Fowler last edited by

          Wonderful piece. Very energetic and expressive! I seem to be working better at night as well! I think Will Terry said that 'you make money in your spare time' (night time for me) so a good night time illustration is 'bank'! lol Look forward to seeing more of your stuff!

          "Never give up! Never surrender!" ~Commander Peter Quincy Taggert

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          • Jonathon B
            Jonathon B last edited by

            Love the expressions and the linework is looking nice. I agree that it's a little confusing what's going on with the genie. I'd say show us a little more of the hand and maybe push the leg back a bit. there's a little tangent happening right where the elbow and the leg are touching and that might be causing some of the problem too. Overall it look great.

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            • Rob Smith
              Rob Smith last edited by

              @Nille-Horgen I really like the way the genie's hair flows right into the smoke from the lamp.

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                Nille Horgen last edited by

                Thank you @Rob Smith 😃 I was in this second trying to fix up the drawing and was just thinking about the smoke and here when i saw your comment. Thanks, i was unsertain if it was too much. But it will come together more in color it seems.

                Love Nille

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                  Nille Horgen last edited by

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                  Hi again guys!
                  Now I have done some hatchwork and more linework. I think this might be a sketch that I should have started over again. But now i have been working on it for so long that I want t o make it work.

                  Love Nille

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                  • Charlie Eve Ryan
                    Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    I love it and the top girl reads so much better! So fun!

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                      Nille Horgen last edited by

                      @Charlie Eve Ryan Yey! Thats good! Thanks 😃

                      Love Nille

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                      • Steve Young
                        Steve Young last edited by

                        lol, very funny image, looks like a mad woman to me.

                        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                          Nille Horgen last edited by

                          Haha @Steve Young maybe it can be that aswell?

                          Love Nille

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                          • Naroth Kean
                            Naroth Kean last edited by

                            I really love your thick and thin line work, it's so expressive.

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                              Nille Horgen last edited by

                              Ooo! Thanks @Naroth Kean that really boosts ny confidence 😃

                              Love Nille

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