I really need some help, critique's would be awesome

[MarkAlan74]

I've been through the perspective classes, how to draw everything, and inking with a pen brush. Here is a drawing of a bunny I found online and I saw a lot of ovals, circles, and cubes so I a gave it a shot...

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[Eli]

Hi @MarkAlan74 , I'm not seeing he image

[Heather Boyd]

I don't really have any experience with markers however perhaps it is the quality of your marker, it looks blotchy or uneven in sections. I would work on blending and making certain all none white areas are covered, no white seeping through.

The bunny is definitively cute, if its a direct copy ensure that your audience is aware of that fact, I am never certain how to go about copyright issues, but if it is for practise keep playing around.

And I can see it.

[Eli]

@eli I can see it now--must have been a glitch!

[MarkAlan74]

@heather-boyd Thank you Heather, I used Copic Markers and I can see the blotchy sections you are talking about. Thank your for your help. The original copy came from Pinterest, I'm just using it for practice. Thanks again.

[Durribie]

He's cute!

What paper are you using? I work in Copics a lot and what paper you use is very important. I have sketched and colored on regular computer paper and it make those blobs and streaks too. When I use it on bristol or a mixed media with a vellum surface the markers blend like a dream!

[Jason Bowen]

check this video out on markers it might help you out: https://youtu.be/tzkd1_f0wUk

[MarkAlan74]

@durribie thank your for your advice, I used the 100 weight card stock that Jake Parker mentioned in "How to Draw Everything" lesson. I will try some bristol, thank you so much for your help.

[MarkAlan74]

@jason-bowen Thanks Jason, that was an awesome video!! Short and packed with great advice, I learned a lot.