10 Feb 2018, 16:58

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Hey I really like your cute characters 🙂 I did a quick paint over for you to see what it could look like with some small changes (hope you don't mind).

I rotated the beak - I made the lighting less bright in the highlights (I'm an oil painter it's something I always do right or wrong not sure) - I darkened the wing so you see the beak clearly and took the red out the little character and made it more pink like the arms to separate it from the bird.

Gives you another option to think about. 🙂