15 Aug 2017, 02:06

Hi Jason!

Great sketch so far!
I agree with Tess suggestions about the gestures and hands. I hope you don't mind, I did a quick paint over to show 2 other things I would change :

  1. I would make the shark much bigger, and higher than the man (right now their heads are almost on the same level; I think compositionally it would look better to break this symmetry.

  2. This is a small thing, but I would put legs under the bath 😉 I have never seen a bath directly on the floor. It would also create a nicer silhouette!

Hope it helps 🙂

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