23 Feb 2017, 22:08

Did thumbnails and now working on comps. Can you give me feedback on composition please?

Is there too little variety in types of illustrations or angles?

Am I making the illustrations too complicated?

I have two "stories" going on at once, in a way, one with the girl and her mom and one with Uncle Carl and the chickens. The girl and her mom don't really have anything to do with Carl and the chickens except that they are viewing what is happening. (chickens roostng on Uncle Carl-a counting book).

The cow needs to be in there for the ending......I think. How often though?

Should I downplay the mom and daughter and focus more on Carl and the chickens? ( How can I show who is speaking without the mother and daughter though.) Just a little scene of them on the first page to show who is talking?

I'm starting to answer my own questions I think ๐Ÿ™‚ BUT, I still want feedback!

Thanks!

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