1 Sept 2024, 23:05

@chrisaakins I like the concept of your story! I'm just wondering if your composition might be more effective in a vertical framing. Your main character is the untrustworthy thief of a lizard. Making him significantly larger would make him the center of attention. The torch bearing rat clan could then be increased in size without competing. It took me few minutes of study to determine they are rats. As it is my attention first goes to the giant mushroom rather than the lizard. The overall purple cast is a bit much. I’ve found purple is most effective when used like seasoning. Just a touch here and there. Take these comments with a grain of salt as we all have our opinions.🙂

Your other illustrations posted here over the past few years are very good! Keep up the amazing work.