11 Jul 2023, 03:00

Welcome!

I love your texture and color palette.

If youā€™d like to get super picky, besides the legā€¦

The fence line, the house line, and the sidewalk line all draw your eye to the center of the pageā€¦ which happens to be the boys crotch. Thatā€™s a bit off feeling. Next I would suggest spending some time working on proportions and age. His face feels too young for his body proportions. So you could go either way, but if you reduced the body proportions, youā€™d offset the x thatā€™s drawing the eye to the centre of the page.
As the most nit picky of critique, the two hands are at tangents/almost tangents. There isnā€™t quite enough breathing room around the roof and his hand, and the line of the fence lines up too much with his hand holding the ice cream. You could raise that arm a bit higher trying to ā€œprotectā€ the ice cream and remove that tangent. This would also be helped by adjusting the body proportions.

These are just thoughts and you can take them with a grain of salt, but eh there the things I was able to pick out in giving it a once over. Iā€™m looking forward to seeing more of your work. You have a really cute playful style.