Tried to do a bit of storytelling, value and composition. I am still trying to figure out how to draw less atenttion to the trees on the background.... but, if anyone has any feedback, I would love to hear.
And the original had the bunny's ears. I wanted to keep it but I was trying to get the composition right... I got a bit lost. Anyway, i will improve this!!
3 Jun 2023, 18:03
@Juliana-Soares Ditto on what @Chantal-Goetheer said. Such a cute rabbit, and a lovely looking house. 
I'll add a few suggestions too:
-You could try the trees with no line work at all: just colour shapes against a backdrop that's a similar value,
-The perspective is odd because the house looks like it's sitting on a flat area, as does the river, but the whole background looks like it slopes steeply upwards. So you could play around with the background perspective, and the trees could overlap a lot more,
-The rabbit's ears get cropped off at the top of the image - it would be good to see more there.
I'd also love to see this in colour! 