11 Nov 2022, 13:47

@Katherine I think 1 is the clearest because I know what the new beginning is – the new steed. For 2, I would probably need a hint where the soul is going.

On 1, I wonder if it might help to flip the layout. The Kamari sentence is structured to be End first, then New Beginning second. We might want to see the old steed first, and then the possibility of a new steed second.