27 Oct 2022, 05:41
@Valerie-Light It looks heaps better, now I’m able to see and zoom the art. Great work!
Could I get some website feedback, please?
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@Valerie-Light hi Valerie. I think you should just combine the Super Detailed Stuff and the Playful Kidlit Art. For me at least, their style is the same. Just discuss with any future client how complex they want the project to be to manage expectations. There’s a few pieces i thin you can do without but overall, it looks great
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@Valerie-Light -- beautiful work, as always! Love your style.
Agreeing with the general consensus, and adding my two cents:
- Your website needs a header. Your name should be clearly visible, as well as making it easy for potential clients to contact you. Consider inserting 'contact' buttons at the bottom of your portfolio pages. Separate the bio and contact tab, giving each their own tab.
- Yes, you should organize your portfolio into two different categories. Not necessarily "detailed" and "other" -- the style is actually quite similar, as @Nyrryl-Cadiz pointed out. However, you have adult-focused art and kid-focused art in your detailed tab -- it could be a turn off for some to see an innocent kid lit piece right next to a piece that is more adult in theme, and that contains non-kid-friendly language. What if the categories were something like "art for adults" (or quirky like "art for big kids" if you don't want it confused with adult-adult art) and "art for kids"?
- Your bio, while adorable, is rather long. It might be a big ask to expect an AD or editor with limited time to read it all. I've seen some bio pages that have a short and sweet, just-the-basics bio, followed by a longer bio, if someone has the time and wants to learn more. That might be something to consider.
Again, lovely work! Looking forward to hearing about great things coming your way!
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@Mia-Clarke I'm digesting all your great advice above, and wanted to ask about the frame collapse problem. I'm sure you can tell I'm pretty much a novice at this. I want my gallery to look like the one on your website! Large, tiled images that suit the proportions of the original art. Do I just need to restart my site on Squarespace instead of Wix to get this to happen? I must be missing some menu in Wix that would let me do this.
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@Valerie-Light wix is such a pain in the butt! I created mine using my iPad and I think that was an issue are you using a desktop?
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@Valerie-Light I’m not really sure how Wix works, but I would be surprised if they didn’t support full bleed for their galleries. I wouldn’t scrap what you have just yet.
️ Did you read through the Wix gallery tutorial page yet? From scanning it quickly, I think you should be able to set your gallery to single column, full width, and then set image scaling to fit.If that doesn’t work, I think it’s still fine. I would focus on the other content notes rather than on the full bleed, because that’s where I think you’ll get the most bang for your buck. I know stuff like this can feel overwhelming if you’ve never done it before, but you’ll be a pro in no time! Hang in there!
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@Mia-Clarke thank you so much for taking the time to link that wix info. I've got a gallery setup now that's not quite what I wish, but shows off those big picture details so much better.
@Nyrryl-Cadiz @Melissa-Bailey you are absolutely right about the age group division, and now that I've split it that way I can't believe I ever had it organized another way.
@Asyas_illos why does Wix seem to specialize in making things aaaalmost work? I was checking out your cute website gallery, and I think your contact link might be non-working?
I feel really good about this website refresh! in addition to reformatting my galleries, I've updated the captions and some SEO stuff, cut my bio in half, added a name header and a lot more opportunities for contact, etc etc. Next up is a SHOP page!! (but not tonight)
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@Valerie-Light yes and I don’t know how to fix that if you click the back button and refresh it tends to work but that’s still a problem it’s enough for someone to lose interest.
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@Valerie-Light It looks heaps better, now I’m able to see and zoom the art. Great work!
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@Valerie-Light Hi Valerie! Your artwork is so beautiful!
I remember being very impressed when I watched the Rabbit Road Race Critique Arena and saw your entry.I agree that your site looks a lot better based on the great advice given by others. Here are my comments:
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The banner with your name on it (which is super pretty by the way!) doesn’t appear at the top of the page when you go to the website. It’s way down at the bottom. It should be the first thing people see!
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On your “Art for Grownups” page, the last 3 images look to me like they are children’s book illustrations, or at least they wouldn’t be only for grownups.
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I’m not a big fan of the term “little kids”. Especially because some of your work could be appropriate for older children.
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I don’t feel like the division between your two styles works. The only real division I see is that the 2 pieces with the flowers/text have their own style. All the rest seem to fall within the same realm.
Great job on the redesign - your new bio is great!
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@Valerie-Light I think your site looks great! I agree with @susanhowarth-art that the last three images on "Art for Grownups" section seem more for children, maybe older children, but I wouldn't necessarily put them in the grown-up category. I love your tortoise and the hare piece and would put that closer to the top because it is so amazing. Same with your haunted house one. I actually have a hard time saying which one is my favorite since you have so many good pieces.
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@susanhowarth-art Thanks for the compliments and feedback, Susan! I didn't realize the name header wasn't pinned to the top on mobile, so I think that's fixed now. I'll take your advice on the 'little kids' phrasing. I just switched it to "Editorial and Game Art" and "Art for Kids" I'd love to hear your take on that.
I want to do work for kids (and I'm working on a baby board book, and I'd love to do stuff for Highlights or Ranger Rick, etc.) but I also want to do fanged monsters for board games and sassy field guides with swear words.
and @Kim-Rosenlof you're right that the 3 monster family images don't agree. Will you check out this revision?
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@Valerie-Light I think the distinction between “Editorial and Game” and “Art for Kids” works a lot better.
The only other thing I’d mention is that if you are looking for work in children’s art and someone goes to your website, they won’t see anything on the main page that indicates you do that kind of work. At least in mobile (where I’m looking), it’s hidden in the menu drop down. I’m not sure what the fix would be though!