19 Feb 2016, 20:24

I really love the characterisation in your sketching! The goose is fantastic 🙂

Personally I agree with your other illustrator friends that the first one feels a little crowded...the goose is the focal point but he feels too close to the terrier-type dog in the foreground... 2 and 3 feel quite similar looking overall, (the goose is smaller in no.3..and overall it's less cropped?) ...but I prefer 2 because I like that the goose is a similar size to the dogs, it makes him/her look like one of them, and you also have a clear contrast in value between the goose, middle ground, and foreground..the 3rd one is more smudgy value-wise. But I don't mind it being less cropped, that's good too. All personal opinion though and will be good to see where this goes next!