@demotlj I struggle with straight lines as well, or also just clean lines around curves too for a lot of my traditional painting. For the practise I have done in watercolour I would say lightly draw out your lines and if you do wet on wet, watch where you put your water ensuring it is parallel snug with your drawn line. Your paint will only go where there is water. As well try to keep your paint on wet on wet consistent, so the colour doesn't look less where you don't want it. And then I agree with @carriecopa about hand and wrist and arm control, because a shaky hand is hard to make or continue a straight line like drawing with pencil.
=) Heather B.
THE FIST is about a guy who punches stuff real good. His wife is a spaceship. They’re on the run from the EVIL Space Army, but stop along the way to fight for money.
It’s a big, action-packed, weird, silly, four-color, fun, dumb, love-letter to all the comics, cartoons and video games that formed my brain as a kid.
It’s a book I've been working on and off between projects for four years. I "write", illustrate, color, and publish it all on my own. I say "write" because it's more of a freeform kind of thing. I use a loose outline, but make up a chunk of it as I go.
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I like your illustration! The seeds blowing through the air is a great image, I like how the girl's hair shows the same motion. I also like the bunnies watching her. Your illustration shows depth by progressively lightening and softening the colors. I think that was done really well.
I agree with previous comments about the tree gap on the far right.
I also think that the leaves on the closest tree need to have some darker shades like the trunk and grass below it.
Lastly the first hill ends right at the fence post, and I think it should extend a little beyond the post. Only because it seems strange on inspection.