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    Basic Perspective Final assignment

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    • Kyle Tobey
      Kyle Tobey last edited by

      Hi everyone! First post! I just completed the final for the basic perspective class. I have a few of my own thoughts, but want to hear yours first.

      I didn’t add any details, just wanted to make sure my perspective was right first.
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      Something looks off with the door in the back. Also I took away a wall for it to make sense. Haha.

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      • txels
        txels @Kyle Tobey last edited by

        @Kyle-Tobey Yeah the door looks off because you used the wrong vanishing point. You should use the one on the left...

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        • Kyle Tobey
          Kyle Tobey last edited by

          You’re right!! Thank you!
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          • Jacy13
            Jacy13 @Kyle Tobey last edited by

            @Kyle-Tobey It's looking good to me! 🙂 I like the addition of the rough value block in. It helps solidify the objects in the space.

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            • Debra Garcia
              Debra Garcia last edited by

              What's the box-like thing on the right by the doorway?

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              • Kyle Tobey
                Kyle Tobey @Debra Garcia last edited by

                @Debra-Garcia the dresser. It might look off because it’s right at HL? Adding some details helped. 47974DDC-3CD2-441A-8C9B-FCA2D159B6A1.jpeg

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                • Freya Chakour
                  Freya Chakour last edited by

                  Hey I'm still thinking about the dimensions in the room, like, the dresser in the back seems very large compared to the door, and the lamb on top of it is even higher than the door. this gives it a bit of an unusual feeling, (also the walls are pretty high - these things compared make the door look very narrow (like you have to duck to go through it) (i'm not sure, maybe this is just for you to study and then its not as important, but if you want to use this for a project, maybe this is helpful for you to balance those things out)

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                  • Debra Garcia
                    Debra Garcia last edited by

                    I think it would really help if your vanishing points were a lot further apart. When a vanishing point is in the image, (and I think the one on the right is, no?) Then that means the other vanishing point needs to be waaaaaaaay off the page, which kind of sucks because having both vanishing points on the canvas, or really close is just so much more convenient. Lol

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