First Time Posting.

erinrew

Hello Fellow SVS'ers,
This is my first time posting any of my own artwork and it is just a preliminary sketch, but welcome some feedback.
It is for my Picture Book The Merry-Go-Round Tree.

@erinrew Hi Erin, welcome to the svs forum.

I really love this, it has a lot of movement and is a very appealing character. Maybe you can have her in this same pose at the height of the swing?

Heather Boyd

@erinrew Hi and welcome too! You definitely see how much fun she is having in gesture and face. I agree with @carolinebautista and maybe in this image show more swing in the tire too. Also if the rope is hanging from that branch show it tied around it.

erinrew

@carolinebautista Great advice thank you.

erinrew

@Heather-Boyd Yes in my second sketch I drew today I tied the rope around the branch and putting more motion in the tire swing makes perfect sense. Thank you!