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    Hey SVS! Just some advice needed!

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    • phoenix yip
      phoenix yip last edited by

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      Hey SVS people! What do you think of this piece. (Btw the comp is not mine, it’s the cover for clone wars) critiques or just comments are always welcome. Thank you!

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      • holleywilliamson
        holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

        I like the style and line work, not sure about how bright the lightsabers are, compared to the muted colors of the rest of the picture.

        https://www.instagram.com/holleywilliamsonart/
        http://holleywilliamson.com

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        • phoenix yip
          phoenix yip @holleywilliamson last edited by

          @holleywilliamson oh ok, so you’re saying I should turn down the saturation a bit?

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          • holleywilliamson
            holleywilliamson SVS OG @phoenix yip last edited by

            @phoenix-yip yes. I think you want the focus to be their faces? The bright lightsabers keep drawing my attention more.

            https://www.instagram.com/holleywilliamsonart/
            http://holleywilliamson.com

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              gavpartridge last edited by

              I think the values could be worked out a little better, the guy on the left (sorry, im not a star wars fan!) His arms are the same value and colour as his body and leg, and also some if the storm troopers ( i know that much) in the background also have the same colour and value. It destroys the illusion of depth.

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