Hey SVS! Just some advice needed!

[phoenix yip]

Hey SVS people! What do you think of this piece. (Btw the comp is not mine, it’s the cover for clone wars) critiques or just comments are always welcome. Thank you!

[holleywilliamson]

I like the style and line work, not sure about how bright the lightsabers are, compared to the muted colors of the rest of the picture.

[phoenix yip]

@holleywilliamson oh ok, so you’re saying I should turn down the saturation a bit?

[holleywilliamson]

@phoenix-yip yes. I think you want the focus to be their faces? The bright lightsabers keep drawing my attention more.