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    Creative Composition (Finished Assignments)

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    • M I
      M I last edited by

      Hi, everyone! Just finished all assignments from CC workbook and looking for critique.

      Trace the master:

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      It's N.C. Wyeth's image if I searched it right

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      The final assignment:

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      Thank you for looking through, comments appreciated). And thank you Will Terry for the great assignments!

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      • TessaW
        TessaW last edited by

        Hey, great job! I really loved this course. Overall I think you did pretty good on your assignments, but I think this was perhaps your weakest assignment:

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        In all of your examples, I don't feel you've really given the viewer anything in particular to look at. You have the options of using one or any combo of color, value, texture, or detail, but you haven't really taking advantage of that. You've colored some items, and spread them evenly throughout the piece. You come closest in the upper right panel- my focus goes to the telescope there, but the focus still feels at bit all over the place. Just my 2 cents. 🤷🏻♀

        It looks like you put in a ton of work and I love how spooky you went with the final. Great job! 👍🏽

        Website: www.tessawrathall.com

        Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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        • M I
          M I last edited by

          Tanks a lot for reply Tessa! Yeah I kinda messed up above mentioned assignment. Didn't really wanted to dive in in a rendered and textured color here, cause I don't feel comfortable with coloring yet. So I just tried to make fun of this panel (at least with upper and bottom right panels)

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