Share your book dummy process?
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@xin-li I definitely get that as well from my story. And I think that is a good thing. Even picture books need 'chapters', 'story loops', 'minor climaxes' that build to the big climax of the story.
That is really what you are seeing with the line going up and down in my book. It is delineating each climax building to the final climax. One thing I discovered doing this was the most energetic climax in the book is not the final climax. That there is another in the resolution portion... not sure if that is okay but I will give it a try.
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@theprairiefox actually, My story has similar pattern. The most enegetic climax is the one before the last. I have not shared with any reader yet, so I have no clue how the story works.