Falling for fall piece Critique

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    Hello, I’m a beginner digital illustrator
    Looking for some critiques and tips on making more interesting pieces!
    Thanks in advance

  • Hey! I'm also a beginner. I think this piece is fairly interesting already! I like the colour palette you've chosen and there's a lot of visual interest in the character's pose.

    I think you would benefit from brushing up on gesture drawing and anatomy. The bent knee looks a bit off and so does the higher arm...

    I also think you could make this composition more interesting by making the character a bit smaller and moving her up and to the right. That would give the suggestion that she has much farther to fall by putting more space between her and the edge of the view she's falling toward.

    Hope that helps!

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