Masterstudy Critique
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Hey I was hoping to get some honest critiques of the progress of my painting of John Singer Sargent's Elizabeth Winthrop Chanler. I am about to go into final rendering stages but I'd like to be notified of any technical errors before finishing. Thank you all so much!!!!
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This looks like a really good start. I noticed a couple of relationships that you might want to check before diving in for the final round. Here's what jumped out to me. The forehead seems a little tall. Also note the position of the ears relative to the nose. The right side of the mouth seems a bit undeveloped, but that’s probably just because it’s early stages yet. Great work can’t wait to see where you go with this.
The blue lines mark out the spots that caught my attention:
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@sketchbook Those are great points! Thank you and I'll work on that