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    Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

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    • Will Terry
      Will Terry last edited by Will Terry

      Hi Guys,

      If you've been a frequent visitor/contributor to these forums you know I give free critiques from time to time and post the draw overs here in the forum.

      I'd like to do the next round in a facebook LIVE event to promote my upcoming Draw50things paid critiques.

      If you would like to participate simply upload an illustration you would like critiqued in that LIVE event. The art needs to be finished and needs to be a narrative illustration but it does NOT need to be a draw50things assignment. It could be from a children's book project or other narrative. It could be a personal portfolio piece as well.

      *I will keep all of the critiques anonymous and can blur our your signature if you'd like.

      I'll probably critique 5- 10 images in my Facebook LIVE next month. I'm asking now so I have images to critique when I'm ready. I'll pick images that I think will help me explain some of the concepts I'd like to teach. I probably won't be able to critique all of them. I'll announce the time and date when we get closer and I'll update this thread with that information. If we get enough images I might do more than one event.

      Thank you in advance for agreeing to let me use your work to help everyone!

      SVS Instructor
      http://willterry.com/

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Will Terry last edited by

        @will-terry you can have your pick and either or both of these if they fit your needs. Thanks!

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        0_1516155791837_xmas17_sm.jpg


        https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
        https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
        http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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        • Will Terry
          Will Terry @Chip Valecek last edited by

          @chip-valecek Thank you Chip - really appreciate it! These are really fun and I think we can do some great things with them!

          SVS Instructor
          http://willterry.com/

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          • bdyanne
            bdyanne last edited by

            0_1516163032979_worst fear.jpg !0_1516163214985_lowresread.jpg

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            • rcartwright
              rcartwright last edited by

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              Hi Will hope you can use this

              https://www.scbwi.org/members/richard-cartwright/
              https://www.instagram.com/richardwcartwright/
              https://www.pinterest.ca/richcartwright3/art-of-richard-cartwright/
              https://www.richardwcartwright.ca/

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              • EunJi Jung
                EunJi Jung last edited by EunJi Jung

                I have so many works that need some good advice, but I picked these for now 😃
                It would be so honoured if I get critiqued!

                0_1516164266486_girl-violin-s-signature.jpg
                0_1516164739032_EUNJI_JUNG_SPREAD_ICB3_WK4-label.jpg

                Eunji Jung

                Illustrator | Designer
                eunjijung.com
                instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                • Diego_BioSteam
                  Diego_BioSteam last edited by Diego_BioSteam

                  Cool! Here are two illustrations that I would like some critique if possible. They are not digital, tho.

                  The first one was done with the draw 50 things challenge in mind, but I didn't achieve the 50 things. The second one (done after I learned "how to ink" with Jake Parker) is for a story that I am trying to write and illustrate as part of my process of learning and improving. Both are done with watercolour, a bit of acrylic and ink in A3 paper - the second one has gouache on the characters and a bit of white poster colour for the steam vapour.

                  0_1516176433894_Zombie Hero - Resized.png

                  0_1516176515299_Welcome to the Core - Resized.jpg

                  Diego Araujo
                  instagram.com/diego_biosteam/

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                  • audrey dowling
                    audrey dowling last edited by

                    Here's mine again 🙂 (bottom right corner is space for a smaller illustration)
                    0_1516182627722_Happy Hatch day sketch 3.jpg

                    website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                    twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                    facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                    • Will Terry
                      Will Terry last edited by

                      Thank you guys! I really appreciate your willingness to allow me to use your images...I'll make sure that it's anonymous in the upcoming facebook LIVE broadcast... I can still use a few more!

                      I'll update this thread when I have the date and time of the critique.

                      SVS Instructor
                      http://willterry.com/

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                      • Will Terry
                        Will Terry @audrey dowling last edited by

                        @audrey-dowling I'll get this one in this time Audrey!

                        SVS Instructor
                        http://willterry.com/

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                        • carriecopadraws
                          carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

                          Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.

                          0_1516222033035_triple-dog-dare-finished-tall.jpg

                          Carrie Copa
                          https://carriecopadraws.com/

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                            Dian last edited by

                            Again, thank you Will! 🙂 0_1516274975138_dieren op fiets_dian.jpg

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                            • K
                              kerilynnwilson last edited by kerilynnwilson

                              @Will-Terry
                              Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!
                              0_1516302045289_Untitled-3.jpg

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                              • audrey dowling
                                audrey dowling @Will Terry last edited by

                                @will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it 🙂

                                website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                                twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                                facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                                • beckporter
                                  beckporter last edited by

                                  I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. ![0_1516393869031_whisperandpoint.jpg](Uploading 100%) 0_1516394051471_cocoaforsanta.jpg

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                                  • beckporter
                                    beckporter last edited by

                                    Oops. Second time's a charm? 🙂
                                    0_1516394876444_whisperandpointsmall.jpg

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                                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @EunJi Jung last edited by

                                      @eunji-jung I love your style!!!

                                      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/

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                                      • beckporter
                                        beckporter @kerilynnwilson last edited by

                                        @kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series. 🙂

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                                        • EunJi Jung
                                          EunJi Jung @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                          @nyrryl-cadiz Thank you 😃

                                          Eunji Jung

                                          Illustrator | Designer
                                          eunjijung.com
                                          instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                                          • K
                                            kerilynnwilson @beckporter last edited by

                                            @beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind 🙂 This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback 🙂

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