7 Oct 2017, 04:36
Looking for a critique, help me make this spectacular!
Hallow-ink wip
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Looking for a critique, help me make this spectacular!
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@russ-van-dine tell me about this image what are you trying to accomplish? I like the raven, you've found a good reference for the energy I think you were trying to catch. personally, i think there are too many hatch lines evenly distributed over the body of the bird in a uniform fashion, which flattens the bird out but thats a small nit pick.
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I will work the lines to bring more dimension in the bird, this is an updated version, worked the little pumpkin head a bit. I will add blues, greens and especially oranges with photoshop later. Trying to get the layout and design, and feeling complete with just black and white... thanks for your help.
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worked on the figure of the Halloween guy, changed arms and legs a bit and worked on his outfit.
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@russ-van-dine I think the left arm needs to move up a bit and he needs more of a shoulder...
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Coming along...
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the character's head is the illumination point...
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Hi russ I dont really like to give critque but i really like this piece(nice idea) The white highlights seem a bit fuzzy and could be brighter and sharper it maybe needs more contrast or more differences in values.I know everyone wants something different and this is just my opinion.