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    • Naroth Kean
      Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

      Quick sketch and idea and here my story. Haha I had fun with this one.
      Red: Shut up
      Pig: But I'm scared! We are being tied up, ya know?
      Red: Charly will show up
      Pig: I thought he's dead
      Red: Well the text says "He peeked out from behind a huge tree and saw..."
      Wolves: but it does not say he will save you guys and 3rd Thursday does not do continue scene
      Red: I guess we're dead
      Charly (Charlie Chaplin): But Will Terry never said nothing about Red and Pig being eaten.
      Pig: Does that mean we are tied up like forever? The wolves will never stop dancing? And Charly won't stop staring at us?
      Red: Shut up
      feasting-on-red-and-pink.jpg

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      • Lynn Larson
        Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

        • snort * 😛

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        • Naroth Kean
          Naroth Kean last edited by

          I really need to work on better composition for this one.feasting-on-red-and-pink1.jpg

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          • Naroth Kean
            Naroth Kean last edited by

            Maybe a big cat hero
            feasting-on-red-and-pink3.jpg

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            • Lynn Larson
              Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

              I like the first two with Charly. I can really hear Red telling him to shut up hehe

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              • Naroth Kean
                Naroth Kean last edited by

                @Lynn-Larson Thanks Lynn, I already started painting the first one XD

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                • Lynn Larson
                  Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                  Awesome!!

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                  • Carey Bowden
                    Carey Bowden last edited by

                    I love the way you did the wolves! Haha, I can almost hear their silly, villainous song!

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                    • Thrace
                      Thrace last edited by Thrace

                      I love the Charlie Chaplin one too! What a unique idea, and I love the little narrative. I can't wait to see it painted!!

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                      • Rob Smith
                        Rob Smith last edited by

                        I like the Charlie images as well. Great idea of doing a mash-up.

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                        • Maile McCarthy
                          Maile McCarthy @Naroth Kean last edited by

                          @Naroth-Cow OK, you win for concept, hands down. Hahah.

                          I really like the Charlie in the second one and the three dancing wolves from the third. It's hard for me to see the whole image at once on my small screen, so I may not be getting the best read, as far as composition goes.

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                          • Naroth Kean
                            Naroth Kean last edited by

                            Thanks guys, I do enjoy the concept myself haha. I need to spend more time on composition.

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                            • Naroth Kean
                              Naroth Kean last edited by

                              In progress, still gotta fix a lot of stuffs. I'm gonna break for now and do something else, maybe something else new will come to mind.image.jpg

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                              • Thrace
                                Thrace last edited by

                                OMG this is awesome!! I am so in amazed by your work, great job!

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                                • Lynn Larson
                                  Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                                  Beautiful colors!

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                                  • Maile McCarthy
                                    Maile McCarthy @Naroth Kean last edited by

                                    @Naroth-Cow I love how this is turning out -- the color and texture, and the expressions of the characters really bring your concept to life. I love the pig's drippy nose 😛

                                    I might suggest changing something about the rope binding the two foreground characters, so that it's not parallel to and flush with the bottom of the page. I think if you had it more askew, so that it got more cropped off on the pig side, we would still get the impression that they were bound together.

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                                    • Naroth Kean
                                      Naroth Kean last edited by

                                      @Maile-McCarthy I see what you mean there I'm going to change it a bit. I never had the rope in the first place then I added one, I guess I might not need it at all. Thank you for the advice!!!

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                                      • ?
                                        A Former User last edited by

                                        Here my one more take on the piece.
                                        feasting-on-red-and-pink.jpg

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                                        • Lynn Larson
                                          Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                                          Oooh...they are going all out! Party flags and everything! Red looks so mad, i love it hehe!

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                                          • Steve Young
                                            Steve Young last edited by

                                            Really great work!

                                            Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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