WIP Not finished and Not perfect but I'm halfway....well...I'm progressing :-)
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It looks like a fun concept. I think you might want to look at the size relationship between the farmer and his chickens - some of them seem quite small compared to him and to each other. Also, if I'm reading the text for that last page correctly, the farmer has a chicken on his belly and it is supposed to be silly, but he looks afraid to me. Just some thoughts, if I'm not reading it correctly I apologize.
@Rebecca-Hirsch The word is smelly So, the chicken sizes are inconsistant in the pictures, or they just look too small for chickens? Thanks for looking and giving feedback!