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    Chiildren's illustration for feedback, thanks!

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    • Vicky Vicky
      Vicky Vicky last edited by

      Hi everyone, my name is Vicky and I'm working on this as a picture book illustration. I'm enjoying the classes here a lot. Sometimes digital is overwhelming because there are so many choices, I used Sketchbook Pro for this. Would lovvickyrubintoothjar.jpg e some feedback. Thanks!

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      • Steve Young
        Steve Young last edited by

        I love your picture, and the little story within it. The problem I have with it is it feels to digital. I would suggest not using any of your brushes at max opacity. I really love the drawing, I think practicing with the line work, using a digital pencil would probably make this image much better.

        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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        • Vicky Vicky
          Vicky Vicky @Steve Young last edited by

          @Steve-Young Thank you! I will try that.

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          • Fabienne
            Fabienne @Vicky Vicky last edited by

            @Vicky-Vicky Welcome here, Vicky! I like your composition idea a lot but I have some troubles with it. I think the wisps are a lil bit distracting because the head ends with the lid/glas wall. Break the symmetry and angle her head. Maybe a hand touches the glas or she hold it up… Try to use one brush palette (Is this the right word for it?). In my opinion, the textured crayon brush doesn't fit with the bold and flat brush.
            Keep up the good work and I'm curious about your next pictures! 🙂

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            • Vicky Vicky
              Vicky Vicky @Fabienne last edited by

              @Fabienne Thank you Fabenne! I'm reworking it.

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