Living Underwater - May prompt: let's share our WIPs and inspiration

[Fey Realme]

Heres what ive been throwing together since the other day. How important would it be to render the inerior wall do you think?

It needs some more rendering all round, doesnt it

[Jason Crowley]

I came up for a few ideas for this prompt so I wanted to create this second piece for HTFYA:

It's a husband hermit crab who shows up with a dilapidated doll head as a shell to his disappointed/annoyed wife and amused child. I want to show both amusement with the surrounding fish but also a bit of sadness/concern from the whale who can see that while this looks funny, it's also sad as the doll's head is pollution from humans.

[Reb Erlik]

@R-Fey-Realme The mer-sisters idea is cute! Could use more story. Are they getting ready for a special event? What details in their environment could you add to show more about their personalities? Are they getting ready for school with those backpacks? What did they do for homework? Are they going to be late? Maybe there's a "sea bus" arriving that can be seen through their window.

[Fey Realme]

@reberlik thanks! They are best friends and this is after school, ill try to get some more supporting information in there—very helpful!

[Erin Hawkins]

Hi everyone. I've been thinking about this prompt for a few weeks and I am just now realizing that perhaps my train of thought might have veered too far from the intent of the prompt. I started thinking about living underwater like Jacques Cousteau and then the idea came to me to make a sea turtle version of Jacques Cousteau who wears a red hat and makes underwater films. I haven't started the final art but I've been gathering references and did some quick thumbnails.

Do you think my concept fits the prompt even though it's not depicting humans living underwater? I could always make the art anyway but pass on submitting it for HTFYA. Any opinions/feedback welcome Thank you!

[B-rex]

@Erin-Hawkins I don't think it matters what species it is as long as said species is depicted actually living underwater and as long as there is a story that is being told. At least that's what I gathered from the prompt. I like the idea of a sea turtle filmmaker!

[Erin Hawkins]

@B-rex thank you for your thoughts — I think I’ll move forward with this one and try to get it posted in time for HTFYA. I can’t help myself, I love sea turtles and Jacques Cousteau is so inspiring!

[Jason Crowley]

@Erin-Hawkins You don't need to have humans in the prompt, but it's worth thinking about whether you want this to be a portfolio piece, and if so, consider who you want to target. For me, I haven't focused on showing characters and kids enough in my recent portfolio pieces, so I'm going to try and think of ways to put kids/people in my future HTFYA submissions.

[Jason Crowley]

Here's my initial pencil layers and value study. On to the hardest part of any illustration next: colour

[Erin Hawkins]

@Jason-Crowley yes, good point. I am just starting to work on my portfolio (I'm very new here!) but I agree it's good to have a mix of animals and humans. I watched the SVS class on "How to Perfect Your Children's Book Portfolio" (it's just a video) -- it was a great overview of everything you need. I'm just sharing in case that's of interest to you or anyone else here. I'm very early in my journey but I appreciated learning this now, rather than making a ton of illustrations and realizing I'm still missing important things.

[Oana]

Hi! This month's prompt made me think about my old Inktober comic stories, in 2017 and 2018 I managed to follow Inktober and it was the most fun I ever had drawing... My characters got involved in some aquatic mishaps too, so I want to use this prompt and revisit that world. I never had a proper "underwater" city but one could fit nicely there. I also feel that I improved my drawing skills since.. I hope to start again on that kind of endeavour, without Inktober help, and try to put all toghether in a small comic book, at least or my family and friends who love my drawings!

This is a board of images from those stories. Yes, that's ..me surrounded by pig characters, including a pig-mermaid...

I also made a board of references, I don't want to totally change the style but some upgrade is needed, and also not wanting to miss the opportunity to learn something new. I love the flowy and whimsical style of these artists. (Maria Surducan, Ryan Andrews, Ullikummi, Alvaro Arteaga - First two I have in my bookcase, last two found on random pinterest browsing)

[Fey Realme]

@reberlik youll never believe what pinterest showed me just now!
A harpy and a mermaid could love each other — how would you add on and ask “but where would they live?”

[Reb Erlik]

@R-Fey-Realme Awesome! Thanks R. Fey! I might use that idea for a personal project later.
After listening to Jake and Will discussing this prompt in the last livestream, I think I actually misunderstood it. The idea is to show what it would be like to live underwater. So... take an everyday activity you do on land and show how it would look underwater. Will's example was a child running after a schoolbus. Then add details to tell the story. I have a new idea that I'll try to post some sketches of soon.

[Joshua Chennault]

Still like this idea and perspective. The cast shadow of the hammerhead might be a bit much, however, it could show through on the rendering a lot better than in this sketch. Assuming I keep it somewhat subtle.

I worked on the characters a bit. Even overdeveloped them I think, and brought them back down a little simpler. Also got a lot better expression on the mother. Added in a couple of other small details.

Anywho, let me know y'all's opinions if you have any.

[Tash]

@Joshua-Chennault I think the adding the shadow of the shark is brilliant! It gives the viewer a little more context about why your characters are hiding, and it feels a little ominous

[Oana]

First sketches of what I am working on, I wonder how it reads to the viewer who knows nothing about my old porchi stories... !

First I tried a detail, hoping it will read well in a larger composition

The larger composition - presented as the opening page of a comic story:

I added the final result here. I am surprised I managed to get such a colorful result!

I was planning on adding more fish and brightening the lights inside the houses, but got no time left, maybe I will do it later...
Meanwhile, can you find the missing pearl?

[Reb Erlik]

I finally thought of an idea I want to do. Which version do you guys like better? Any other ideas for merpeople in the audience? Thanks!

[Reb Erlik]

@reberlik !

Working on detailing characters.The bass player is supposed to look like a seahorse in silhouette. Is it working?

[Reb Erlik]

@reberlik

Color studies. I think it needs another spotlight at the bottom to make the focal point on the human fan singing along. Maybe yellow or orange? Alternatively I could move the diver taking photos so that the camera flash will act as the third spotlight.
What do you think?

[Reb Erlik]

@reberlik Linework coming along